these are a couple sketches I did and i was just wondering if anyone had any critism or advice before I start working on them officially. I can tell there are a couple things I need to fix but I used pen for some of the pictures so I can't fix the sketch lol but i can fix it on the computer. Help would be much appreciated
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Critism or help would be appreciated
Posted by hellobaphomet - April 17th, 2019
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That is really good shading practice you know. I enjoy how you highlighted the hair. Can't wait to see what you come up with when it is complete.
Thank you so much, I'm hoping I execute my sketches well. But thanks!
@AdventVoice @hellobaphomet Yes, they came out very well. Really can't complain about your work...I would not want to anyway. LOL I am going to be writing an article about shading and sketching and some of the techniques I use...it is very technical but your method is flawless...and as I look at it there are some things you do that I forgot to mention. Wonderful works done here.
Thank you!
Carlos01
They look really nice! I especially love the eyes. They're very expressive; and I can see that you spent a lot of time on them. I would change the lips; they kind of look too big. I would also develop the hair more; particularly on the second image.
Other than that, I think you're on the good track. You have talent girl; now you only need to develop it more :)
hellobaphomet
Thank you so much, I will take your advice, thats what I needed. Thank you!